tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post1072386587570563437..comments2023-10-18T08:54:01.163-03:00Comments on A Piece of My Mind: Poetry Train Monday - 62 - I Can’t Be Your Captive If I Give Myself To YouJulia Phillips Smithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15392455413201190775noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-38418209109577069532008-09-13T00:59:00.000-03:002008-09-13T00:59:00.000-03:00Missy - I took another look at the last line and g...Missy - I took another look at the last line and gave it a different twist.Julia Phillips Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15392455413201190775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-21570955588824209492008-08-19T19:01:00.000-03:002008-08-19T19:01:00.000-03:00Ooh, nice! Scorpius is such an intriguing charact...Ooh, nice! Scorpius is such an intriguing character, and I can tell you're having a great time with him! :)Thomma Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12490964079393282131noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-29115608167031914532008-08-19T08:12:00.000-03:002008-08-19T08:12:00.000-03:00I love the title, and the poem itself is powerful....I love the title, and the poem itself is powerful. Well done!Annette Gallanthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17139138912473286143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-46945958203725669202008-08-18T18:19:00.000-03:002008-08-18T18:19:00.000-03:00Medieval,technology and the Character Scorpius all...Medieval,technology and the Character Scorpius all Fascinatingly. Great Poem.HeatherKhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15361231482357064945noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-71544607292799251812008-08-18T12:12:00.000-03:002008-08-18T12:12:00.000-03:00You had me until the end. Having been through such...You had me until the end. Having been through such a horrific experience while manacled, it would take complete and utter trust for him to allow her to cuff him. I just didn't get that from the last line. Other than that, fantastic!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-40695078951281177592008-08-18T10:50:00.000-03:002008-08-18T10:50:00.000-03:00Excellent Julia. I love the idea of the medievil a...Excellent Julia. <BR/><BR/>I love the idea of the medievil aspects with new science and technology.Amy Ruttanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02212879406999128140noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-19516414847571048362008-08-18T02:39:00.000-03:002008-08-18T02:39:00.000-03:00I loved the title! One great write, this!plunging ...I loved the title! One great write, this!<BR/><BR/><A HREF="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2008/08/plunging-in-tunneled-abyss.html" REL="nofollow">plunging in the tunneled abyss</A>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com