tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post1530015514867421613..comments2023-10-18T08:54:01.163-03:00Comments on A Piece of My Mind: Poetry Train Monday - 59 - How Can I Ache For What I Never HadJulia Phillips Smithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15392455413201190775noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-86241313180575574302008-07-30T19:36:00.000-03:002008-07-30T19:36:00.000-03:00Just so you know, you are fast becoming one of my ...Just so you know, you are fast becoming one of my very favorite writers, and the reason for that is you have managed to interest me in a genre I've never been into before, because I love the way you write it! I want to know more about Scorpius after this...you always leave me wanting more. ;-)Karinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05399849455270704359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-90451575449327087122008-07-28T23:18:00.000-03:002008-07-28T23:18:00.000-03:00my my my!i remember another poem with these charac...my my my!<BR/><BR/>i remember another poem with these characters from a few weeks ago, yes?<BR/><BR/>i think you're related to sheharazad of the 1001 nights...you know how to create tension!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-3343736883246112622008-07-28T22:57:00.000-03:002008-07-28T22:57:00.000-03:00Nice! Don't you just love that first infatuation ...Nice! Don't you just love that first infatuation with a new character?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15334812243182354729noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-83344283720865456702008-07-28T21:17:00.000-03:002008-07-28T21:17:00.000-03:00Thanks for the wonderful comments, everyone! Scorp...Thanks for the wonderful comments, everyone! Scorpius is very new to me - I'm still in the infatuation stage.Julia Phillips Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15392455413201190775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-78960793041132228322008-07-28T20:28:00.000-03:002008-07-28T20:28:00.000-03:00Wow. That ending was NOT what I was expecting. Coo...Wow. That ending was NOT what I was expecting. Cool twist, most definitely.Susan Helene Gottfriedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12778191943289129869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-33892670318583101992008-07-28T19:16:00.000-03:002008-07-28T19:16:00.000-03:00'My ankles drag with phantom shacklesI hear them s...'My ankles drag with phantom shackles<BR/>I hear them still, each moment I’m alone'<BR/><BR/>great hook into his psyche. there would be a pandora's box of motivations rooted in ambivalence between that and:<BR/><BR/>'I long to kiss her foot, to lay in homage on those polished tiles'<BR/><BR/>i hope the lady is worthy of such honor. ah, but there's the rub eh?Joy Reneehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04976987581528470589noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-30521652264846123032008-07-28T12:55:00.000-03:002008-07-28T12:55:00.000-03:00I like the way you see how Sporpius is wandering i...I like the way you see how Sporpius is wandering if he is a good man and the fact that he is thankfull for what she give him.Jillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12871047592501542942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-11820209704181379072008-07-28T11:26:00.000-03:002008-07-28T11:26:00.000-03:00Very moving and powerful. I really love this.Very moving and powerful. I really love this.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-25856912390044157832008-07-28T08:50:00.000-03:002008-07-28T08:50:00.000-03:00Oh joy, Thomma Lyn!Oh joy, Gautami!Oh joy, Thomma Lyn!<BR/><BR/>Oh joy, Gautami!Julia Phillips Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15392455413201190775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-30318923251112025282008-07-28T05:29:00.000-03:002008-07-28T05:29:00.000-03:00I love this. I am posting at read write poem for y...I love this. I am posting at read write poem for you. It works great as a ballad.<BR/><BR/><A HREF="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2008/07/deeply-in-love-with-draculas-daughter.html" REL="nofollow">deeply in love with dracula's daughter</A>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-50440335349704853162008-07-28T04:55:00.000-03:002008-07-28T04:55:00.000-03:00Oh, I like your poem, and I like Scorpius's voice!...Oh, I like your poem, and I like Scorpius's voice! What a great idea, a backstory poem to get a grip on a character's mindset.<BR/><BR/>I've given you an award on my blog! :) Come see!Thomma Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12490964079393282131noreply@blogger.com