tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post5068980085517245717..comments2023-10-18T08:54:01.163-03:00Comments on A Piece of My Mind: Weekend Writer's Retreat - 16Julia Phillips Smithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15392455413201190775noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-48134370495946456682010-07-22T07:44:48.901-03:002010-07-22T07:44:48.901-03:00I like this scene. Lots of mystery. I'm worr...I like this scene. Lots of mystery. I'm worried about Richolf and then the ending with the servant coming for Scorpius makes me really want to turn the page and continue.Mia Celestehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08961508590395855772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-63351329349533275732010-07-18T11:50:04.724-03:002010-07-18T11:50:04.724-03:00WHAT!! I'm not ready for Scorpius to move on a...WHAT!! I'm not ready for Scorpius to move on and I'm certainly not ready to leave Richolf - you will tell us what happened to him? No, I don't want to know. Yes - OMG - my imagination is flying with all te possibilities and most of them are not good. <br /><br />And what happens to the dog and the falcons if Scopius leaves? So many questions and you've just left me hanging! ACK - I declare Monday or Tuesday "Bonus Weekend Writer's Retreat" - that's right, get busy, you'll need another instalment earlier than expected ;)<br /><br />Great job, Julia!Janethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13297537075103893956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-9880170922145571482010-07-18T01:10:04.495-03:002010-07-18T01:10:04.495-03:00Oh no! This can't be good. Can't wait un...Oh no! This can't be good. Can't wait until next week.Alice Audreyhttp://www.aliceaudrey.com/?page_id=4029noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-17034442702999700452010-07-17T15:27:32.070-03:002010-07-17T15:27:32.070-03:00oh, how i love your story and how it's develop...oh, how i love your story and how it's developing. as the others have said... i want to know more. you know just how to draw a readers attention to the very last word. well done.<br /><br />sorry for my long absence. i've been busy with family, etc. hope all is well.Naquillityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04784964201596357136noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-48412640361104401172010-07-17T13:30:13.382-03:002010-07-17T13:30:13.382-03:00I knew at some point Scorpius would be moving on, ...I knew at some point Scorpius would be moving on, since his adventure lies beyond the falconer's cottage. But this still caught me a little by surprise.Travis Codyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06192526507760146748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-12969144665371098152010-07-17T12:39:25.609-03:002010-07-17T12:39:25.609-03:00Wow, you and Janet both left your readers hanging ...Wow, you and Janet both left your readers hanging this week.<br /><br />Poor Scorpius. This does not bode well.Ann (bunnygirl)http://www.ampino.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-65737783452378946272010-07-17T11:15:27.759-03:002010-07-17T11:15:27.759-03:00Another intriguing installment. I did finally get...Another intriguing installment. I did finally get WWR up this today, sorry about last weekend and being late this weekend.Calico Crazyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02877107683027950258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-86194862599583310742010-07-17T01:51:26.820-03:002010-07-17T01:51:26.820-03:00I want to know more!I want to know more!Irehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02225452291299150178noreply@blogger.com