tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post6792981277235307236..comments2023-10-18T08:54:01.163-03:00Comments on A Piece of My Mind: Weekend Writer's Retreat - 58Julia Phillips Smithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15392455413201190775noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-60367155307625996462011-07-20T01:09:57.880-03:002011-07-20T01:09:57.880-03:00This is really a raw and brutal scene. I can reall...This is really a raw and brutal scene. I can really feel Scorpius' pain. I sure hope that Lord Thibault is for real.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04443736284850057306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-45264946357501347162011-06-18T08:40:57.662-03:002011-06-18T08:40:57.662-03:00Yikes, Julia. Not only do you write the pain as if...Yikes, Julia. Not only do you write the pain as if you know it intimately (which I know you do), you don't hesitate to torture this poor guy. Does anything good EVER happen to him?Susan Helene Gottfriedhttp://westofmars.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-66803020614567774992011-06-13T03:32:09.557-03:002011-06-13T03:32:09.557-03:00I hope he doesn't sustain any permanent injuri...I hope he doesn't sustain any permanent injuries.Alice Audreyhttp://www.aliceaudrey.com/?page_id=4029noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-44136408717548857092011-06-12T12:50:43.558-03:002011-06-12T12:50:43.558-03:00The description in this passage is excellent. I s...The description in this passage is excellent. I suspect that Scorpius is going to find out quite a bit about himself in the next sections.Travis Codyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06192526507760146748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-23137708501984503422011-06-12T02:31:48.718-03:002011-06-12T02:31:48.718-03:00A chilling sequence. I hope Lord Thibault is for ...A chilling sequence. I hope Lord Thibault is for real and not torturing Poor Scorpius just to cover a story or amuse himself in some sick fashion.Ann (bunnygirl)http://www.ampino.comnoreply@blogger.com