tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post5968756142563812924..comments2023-10-18T08:54:01.163-03:00Comments on A Piece of My Mind: Poetry Train Monday - 36 - Excerpt From My Scottish Gamekeeper StoryJulia Phillips Smithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15392455413201190775noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-89211449812952870032008-02-15T09:47:00.000-04:002008-02-15T09:47:00.000-04:00this is breathtaking. literally. well almost lite...this is breathtaking. literally. well almost literally. it's doing funny things to my breathing anyway. and makes me want to hold my breath for the next sentence.<BR/><BR/>by a strange coincidence the only love scene i've ever written was the one in line for Friday Snippets this week--the day after Valentine's Day. do drop by if you can and see what you think. <BR/><BR/>i've got quite a few more such scenes in the works among my dozen or so stories but every time i get to the edge of those scenes my words choke up. twenty years ago it might have been the prudery of my fundie upbringing but i don't think that is the problem anymore.Joy Reneehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04976987581528470589noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-4275504669729791292008-02-12T20:27:00.000-04:002008-02-12T20:27:00.000-04:00Julia, I really enjoyed your scene. Sean Bean is a...Julia, I really enjoyed your scene. Sean Bean is a favorite of mine so you had me from the start.Shelley Munrohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03090469550227550713noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-47844402182725815662008-02-12T18:05:00.000-04:002008-02-12T18:05:00.000-04:00OH.MY.!!!!!I Like the turn of phrase'Bang up'- pre...OH.MY.!!!!!<BR/><BR/><BR/><BR/><BR/>I Like the turn of phrase'Bang up'- pretty descriptive of this whole piece- my my my.Olgahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00811133173085232576noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-73434387940011062842008-02-12T12:16:00.000-04:002008-02-12T12:16:00.000-04:00you chose your cast well - both not only easy to l...you chose your cast well - both not only easy to look at, but they radiate intelligence and force of character. no 'vanillla' types here!M.https://www.blogger.com/profile/07498466631016466048noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-56400410022742954662008-02-12T09:56:00.000-04:002008-02-12T09:56:00.000-04:00I love the excerpt, oh god I LOVE SEAN BEAN TOO!!!...I love the excerpt, oh god I LOVE SEAN BEAN TOO!!! WTG!!Red Garnierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14411850216821398015noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-49833194117105440772008-02-11T21:53:00.000-04:002008-02-11T21:53:00.000-04:00Oh, wow! I thoroughly enjoyed that, Julia -- it m...Oh, wow! I thoroughly enjoyed that, Julia -- it made me breathless!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-25365175513337363042008-02-11T21:25:00.000-04:002008-02-11T21:25:00.000-04:00That was great Julia!!!!! :)That was great Julia!!!!! :)Addicted to crafting https://www.blogger.com/profile/01940862289214782332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-91460154638799437102008-02-11T20:58:00.000-04:002008-02-11T20:58:00.000-04:00Wow, can you ever write!!! I feel very small.Wow, can you ever write!!! I feel very small.myrtle beached whalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18338457419555984753noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-81220356289986604082008-02-11T18:28:00.000-04:002008-02-11T18:28:00.000-04:00With what I've read about your writting, I do ador...With what I've read about your writting, I do adore your male characters!!<BR/>And this one want me to read more!Jillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12871047592501542942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-21015734987097045732008-02-11T15:03:00.000-04:002008-02-11T15:03:00.000-04:00Excellent Julia. I love the way you cast your cha...Excellent Julia. I love the way you cast your characters too. :)Akelamaluhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11234268568845148285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-60644044191820445532008-02-11T12:05:00.000-04:002008-02-11T12:05:00.000-04:00That's AWESOME!!!OMG I love Sean Bean too. OH *dro...That's AWESOME!!!<BR/><BR/>OMG I love Sean Bean too. OH *drool*Amy Ruttanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02212879406999128140noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-39875267172980493512008-02-11T11:30:00.000-04:002008-02-11T11:30:00.000-04:00That was amazing! WowThat was amazing! WowR.G. ALEXANDERhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05690665241880768094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-84671206955583155862008-02-11T11:24:00.000-04:002008-02-11T11:24:00.000-04:00Wow, Julia you are an incredible writer! More, mor...Wow, Julia you are an incredible writer! More, more, more!!!Karinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05399849455270704359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-19288481090928104282008-02-11T09:09:00.000-04:002008-02-11T09:09:00.000-04:00Back story! I need to know these people better!!!(...Back story! I need to know these people better!!!<BR/><BR/>(and you know I like back story...)Susan Helene Gottfriedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12778191943289129869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-21740343775776087062008-02-11T03:27:00.000-04:002008-02-11T03:27:00.000-04:00Julia, that is so delightful. You had me going!Julia, that is so delightful. You had me going!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-3190338465773827842008-02-11T00:07:00.000-04:002008-02-11T00:07:00.000-04:00Forgot to mention - my poetry train is over at Six...Forgot to mention - my poetry train is over at Six Degrees of Sexy. http://sixdegreesofsexy.blogspot.comWylie Kinsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09271148590574475682noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2715650832746263882.post-85368294850120454372008-02-10T23:13:00.000-04:002008-02-10T23:13:00.000-04:00Julia - that was fabulous!! And I love that you ca...Julia - that was fabulous!! And I love that you cast your characters (I do the same thing) - I LOVE Sean Bean.<BR/>I want the rest of the book!!Wylie Kinsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09271148590574475682noreply@blogger.com