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Sunday, November 16, 2008
Poetry Train Monday - 75 - A Poem Written For My Mom
I wrote this poem for my mom about fifteen years ago, for her Mother's Day card. Since it's her birthday today, I thought I'd share it here.
This picture was taken yesterday, after she'd read about a 20th anniversay sale at Fisherman's Wharf in Bedford. Lobster was going for an incredible price, so Mom and I hopped in the car and drove out to get some. We bought three 5-pounders, one for Mom, Brad and myself, whose birthdays have just gone by. We proceeded to have a true Maritime feast! We even listened to Great Big Sea while we ate. Can't get much more down home than that.
A Poem Written For My Mom
You helped make my childhood
Soft and safe like a summer night
You urged me to reach as high
As my little fingers could reach
Even if it was for the stars
You knew I could never be disappointed
Even if all I caught were fireflies
Because wasn't that something
To watch them glow?
- Copyright - 1994 - Julia Smith
Julia, there is sooo much beauty in the simplicity of that poem. It's sweet and light, and conjures up images that are warm and nostalgic. I just love it. Thanks for sharing. Happy belated birthday to all.
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~Toni~
What a beautiful poem, Julia. I liked the part about reaching for the stars and getting fireflies.
ReplyDeleteBirthday wishes to you all! :-)
Happy birthday, Julia's mom!
ReplyDeleteI swear, J, I can see your joy for life in the picture of her. You guys are definitely birds of the best kind of feather.
Love that joyous photo! Many happy returns of the day to her!
ReplyDeleteGreat poem, Julia!
Happy Birthday to Julia's Mom!
ReplyDeleteThat is just a beautiful poem m'dear.
I'll be honest; when I read that it was going to be a birthday poem, I thought it was going to be all Hallmarky. No way! It shows so much without getting all sappy by using tired, old cliches. Wonderfully done!
ReplyDeletehow sweet, simple and direct
ReplyDeleteI love the poem. Happy Birthday to all!
ReplyDeleteI love that you listened to GBS while you ate!
ReplyDeleteMmmm that looks so good. Happy Birthday to Julia's Mom!
ReplyDeleteLovely poem! And happy birthday to everyone!
ReplyDeleteWow, Julia -- that's a beautiful poem, and what a wonderful love your mother has for you. I know you must treasure it deeply. You're a lucky daughter, and your Mom is a lucky mother! :)
ReplyDeleteMy mom says hi to everyone!
ReplyDeletewhat a wonderful tribute to your mom!
ReplyDeleteand ooooh lucky you 3 to feast on those lobsters!
I love the way this settles right into the moment and what is important. Beautifully done, friend.
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