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Monday, August 17, 2009
Poetry Train Monday - 114 - Would Not Speak in Haste
I've been watching clips from British miniseries North & South over the weekend, and thought I'd turn the opening shot from the proposal scene into a found poem, using the text from Elizabeth Gaskell's novel.
Would Not Speak in Haste
Thornton stood by the window
Back to the door
Apparently absorbed in watching something
In the street
Apparently
In truth he was afraid
His heart beat thick
He could not forget the touch
Her arms around his neck
Her arms
Her clinging defence of him
Thrilled him through
Melting away all self-control
His heart throbbed quick
Her defence of him
Strong as he was, he trembled
Anticipating what he had to say
How it might be received
She might flutter to his arms. He feared a passionate rejection
He trembled
The idea withered up his future
He refused to think of it
Startled
He turned round
Withered
She had come in so gently
He had never heard her
Street noises more distinct than her slow movements
In her soft muslin gown
She had come in
She stood by the table
Her lids half over her eyes
Her lips just parted
All wan and pale to-day
She stood pale
Dark hair brought down to hide all sign
Of the blow she had received
Head thrown back, in the old proud attitude
She looked like some prisoner, falsely accused of a crime
A crime she loathed and despised
From which she was too indignant
To justify herself
Thornton went with quiet firmness to the door
And shut it
Too indignant
He came back, stood opposite
Receiving the impression of her beautiful presence
Before he dared disturb it
Perhaps to repel it
Before he dared
He was on the verge now
He would not speak in haste
He would weigh each word
He would
On the verge
His hot passion
Weigh each word
His will triumphant
He stopped in mid career
Stopped
- Elizabeth Gaskell, 1855
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Ooooo beautiful!!!!
ReplyDeleteNicely written, Julia~ Have a great Monday~
ReplyDeleteVery nicely done. I love that novel.
ReplyDeleteI love Richard ... sigh. Great found poem too.
ReplyDeleteDid you ever see the Vicar of Dibley with Richard Armitage when he proposes to the Vicar. OMG to funny. Too funny.
He's so dreamy.
I love poetry that tells stories and isn't all ambiguous imagery stuff. Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteGreat story - well told.
ReplyDeleteElizabeth Gaskell is one of my favourite authors - nicely done Julia. :)
ReplyDeleteOh wow -- that's lovely, Julia! :)
ReplyDeleteVery well said....
ReplyDeleteWonderfully written, Julia!
ReplyDeletethis journey started the right way
This is great! You are very talented. :)
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