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Sunday, August 22, 2010
Poetry Train Monday - 166 - You Reached Out
Les McKeown Week wraps up here at A Piece of My Mind with this poem written a week ago for the 3:15 Experiment.
How to participate in the 3:15 Experiment
Starting on the night of July 31/Aug. 1, set your alarm for 3:15 am, wake up, write a poem in the midst of your sleepiness and go back to sleep. Repeat each night for the month of August.
Visit the originators of the project for more information:
Danika Dinsmore
Gwendolyn Alley
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You Reached Out
When I first read about
Your ordeal
I felt as though
My girlhood joy
Had contributed to your
Thirty years of torment
At first
When I gazed once again
Upon your face
From those old photos
When I realized
What had happened
I looked down
I saw blood on my hands
I wish all of those
Girlish hearts
Had been enough to shield you
But I'm grateful
That one woman's heart
Was your haven
That your son
Helped you to see
That boys should be cherished
You spoke against your attacker
But no one would listen
How could a boy
Ward off a predator
Who'd built such a web of terror
Who carved misery
Into so many psyches
You grabbed your own life back
From the chasm's edge
I know that's why
My girlish heart
Thrilled to you
When you gazed into the camera
And reached out
Reached out
Somewhere inside me
I knew that pain lurked
Somewhere inside you
But I also recognized
The courage
You have shown
Have always shown
In the face of it all
© Julia Smith, Aug. 15, 2010
Danika Dinsmore says This is a 3:15 poem? It's far too cohesive! lol.
Akelamalu says Wonderful poem Julia, I like it very much.
Toni says I didn't know. :( And I too was a huge fan.
This is a 3:15 poem? It's far too cohesive! lol.
ReplyDeleteWonderful poem Julia, I like it very much.
ReplyDeleteI didn't know. :( And I too was a huge fan.
ReplyDeleteBlessings,
Toni
I guess sometimes, when you feel a thing so strongly, the words flow cohesively and completely no matter when you write them.
ReplyDeletevery touching and beautifully described....
ReplyDeleteWell done.
Beautiful..
ReplyDeleteI ought to do the 3:15 too!
a trophy
wow, very meditative, detailed, and introspective...3:15 takes us to a different place sometimes, doesn't it?
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